CHANCE
Maria Kasiah P. Dejumo
Name : Dejumo, Maria Kasiah P.
BEED-III
Characters :
Ana : fabulous and has an exotic beauty.
Paulo : a popular student in their school.
John: a long suitor of Ana.
Lenny : friend of Ana who’s understanding and caring person.
Title: CHANCE
Plot:
In this story, Ana and Paulo had a relationship but is only a secret. Why? Because they don’t want other people to know that they had a special relationship. But, john who’s a long suitor of Ana already knows that Ana and Paulo had a relationship, and john is getting mad. Why? Because he is a long-time suitor of Ana but she rejected him.
Paulo was not attending his class, he smoke and drink a lot. Ana get some information regarding what Paulo is doing. She felt angry for she doesn’t want her boyfriend to adopt those kinds of vices, she hated it.
It was Monday morning. Ana is in the coffee shop when she saw her best friend Lenny, she called Lenny to join her. Ana and Lenny had a conversation, “Oh! Ana why do you look sad? Is something wrong?” Ana replied “ thanks for your concern, my dear friend. There’s something I really want to tell you.” What is it my friend?” Lenny said “I lied to you” about what?” Lenny is getting confuse. Ana continued “ I and Paulo have a relationship but I don’t know how to handle this kind of relationship. Because Paulo has a lot of vices and I hated it so much.” “I understand Ana. So, what do you want to do now? Do you want to talk to him about it? I think you should. Or, you want to have a break-up?” Lenny said. Ana replied, “ I really don’t know what to do, I love him so much”, “ Think hundred times, my dear, so you won’t able to have a lot of regrets” Lenny said. “ Thanks Lenny for your advice, it helps me a lot” Ana replied.
In school. Ana see Paulo and try to catch his attention; she wants to talk to Paulo. Paulo approach Ana, “hi Ana, how are you?” Paulo said, “I’m okay” Ana said. “ why do you look sad, is something wrong? C’mon tell me” Paulo told Ana. Ana replied “Not really problem. Can we have talk, just for a moment ?” “ Sure, what is it.” Said Paulo? “ I thought that you don’t have any vice, but I had a wrong impression with you” Ana said. “So what’s wrong with that? That is real me, can’t you understand? “ Paulo replied. Ana said “ Paulo, I told myself that once I had a relationship, I don’t want him to have so many vices ‘coz I really hate a lot, I hope you respect my decisions” Paulo replied to Ana in a sad voice. “Oh c’mon Ana my dear. I can’t avoid it, I am accustom with it.” “ So, if you can’t avoid it, I think we should break up” Ana told Paulo. Paulo got mad “What ! how dare you ! your reason is not enough to break up with me” How dare you too, Paulo !” Ana left Paulo “Ana ! Ana !” Paulo shouted.
Meanwhile, in Ana’s house, Mrs. Cabadin , Ana’s mom, called her for dinner . but Ana’s doesn’t feel hungry. Her mom is worried, so she tried to talk Ana, “ Is something wrong, child?” Ana replied “Nothing, mom I’m okay” “Then why are you crying?” her mom asked. “ I said nothing.” Ana replied in a loud voice, enough to make her mother get out of the room and leave her.
It was Sunday morning. Ana went to the church and she saw Paulo with another girl. “ What the hell, how could he do this to me” Ana told herself. Ana decided to leave the church instead and decide to go to the park. Ana cried, “ Why, Paulo. It’s been only a week since we broke-up and now he had another girl. How could he do this to me?”.
Ana running, with nowhere to go. And still she cry and cry, she did not notice a car approaching. John saw what happened so he rushes Ana to the hospital. When Ana woke up, she saw surprised and cannot believe what she saw, John. He was there when the accident happened.
John called Ana’s mom to tell her what happened to her daughter. Her Mom came in a hurry, “what happened to my daughter?” “she was hit by a car” John told Ana’s mom “she needs to have an operation, the doctors said.
Ana was in the operating room already, one of her doctors came out and talk to Ana’s mom. She was informed that Ana is in critical condition, “I’ll be honest with you, ma’am. Your daughter already has a little chance left to survive. “ Ana’s mom replied “ Please do everything Doctor, I will pay a lot of money just to save my daughter” “I’ll see what I can do” Doctor said.
After the operation, Ana transferred into her room to take a rest, still comatose. Ana’s mom ask the Doctor of what happened to her, why is she still in coma. “ It is because of the accident, that’s why she’s still in coma.” Doctor said.
“ Talk to her, even though she doesn’t reply, will help.” He continued. Ana’s mother thanked John for what he did to her daughter.
Back in school, Lenny sees john walking. Lenny approached John and asked where Ana is, “ Have you seen Ana ? I haven’t seen her for 3 days already”. John replied in a sad voice “ She is in the hospital, she had an accident, still in traumatic condition, by the way, where is Paulo? Did you see him?” “ why?” Lenny said, until john is gone.
In the coffee shop John saw Paulo, john hit Paulo as hard as he can. Paulo was shocked: he tried to hit John back. John confronted Paulo in a loud voice “ I thought you love her. But I was wrong what’s your problem?! “Paulo said angrily. “ she’s in the hospital, still in comma, she had her accident and its your entire fault !!. Paulo was shocked ; he can’t believe what he just heard. That’s same day, he visited Ana in the hospital, Paulo weeping hard, begging for forgiveness.
Two months later, Ana recovered and back In her normal condition. Paulo still visiting Ana in her house tried to talk and even reconcile. Ana already made her decisions, a right decisions for not letting him into her life again instead they became just GOOD FRIENDS.
BEED-III
Characters :
Ana : fabulous and has an exotic beauty.
Paulo : a popular student in their school.
John: a long suitor of Ana.
Lenny : friend of Ana who’s understanding and caring person.
Title: CHANCE
Plot:
In this story, Ana and Paulo had a relationship but is only a secret. Why? Because they don’t want other people to know that they had a special relationship. But, john who’s a long suitor of Ana already knows that Ana and Paulo had a relationship, and john is getting mad. Why? Because he is a long-time suitor of Ana but she rejected him.
Paulo was not attending his class, he smoke and drink a lot. Ana get some information regarding what Paulo is doing. She felt angry for she doesn’t want her boyfriend to adopt those kinds of vices, she hated it.
It was Monday morning. Ana is in the coffee shop when she saw her best friend Lenny, she called Lenny to join her. Ana and Lenny had a conversation, “Oh! Ana why do you look sad? Is something wrong?” Ana replied “ thanks for your concern, my dear friend. There’s something I really want to tell you.” What is it my friend?” Lenny said “I lied to you” about what?” Lenny is getting confuse. Ana continued “ I and Paulo have a relationship but I don’t know how to handle this kind of relationship. Because Paulo has a lot of vices and I hated it so much.” “I understand Ana. So, what do you want to do now? Do you want to talk to him about it? I think you should. Or, you want to have a break-up?” Lenny said. Ana replied, “ I really don’t know what to do, I love him so much”, “ Think hundred times, my dear, so you won’t able to have a lot of regrets” Lenny said. “ Thanks Lenny for your advice, it helps me a lot” Ana replied.
In school. Ana see Paulo and try to catch his attention; she wants to talk to Paulo. Paulo approach Ana, “hi Ana, how are you?” Paulo said, “I’m okay” Ana said. “ why do you look sad, is something wrong? C’mon tell me” Paulo told Ana. Ana replied “Not really problem. Can we have talk, just for a moment ?” “ Sure, what is it.” Said Paulo? “ I thought that you don’t have any vice, but I had a wrong impression with you” Ana said. “So what’s wrong with that? That is real me, can’t you understand? “ Paulo replied. Ana said “ Paulo, I told myself that once I had a relationship, I don’t want him to have so many vices ‘coz I really hate a lot, I hope you respect my decisions” Paulo replied to Ana in a sad voice. “Oh c’mon Ana my dear. I can’t avoid it, I am accustom with it.” “ So, if you can’t avoid it, I think we should break up” Ana told Paulo. Paulo got mad “What ! how dare you ! your reason is not enough to break up with me” How dare you too, Paulo !” Ana left Paulo “Ana ! Ana !” Paulo shouted.
Meanwhile, in Ana’s house, Mrs. Cabadin , Ana’s mom, called her for dinner . but Ana’s doesn’t feel hungry. Her mom is worried, so she tried to talk Ana, “ Is something wrong, child?” Ana replied “Nothing, mom I’m okay” “Then why are you crying?” her mom asked. “ I said nothing.” Ana replied in a loud voice, enough to make her mother get out of the room and leave her.
It was Sunday morning. Ana went to the church and she saw Paulo with another girl. “ What the hell, how could he do this to me” Ana told herself. Ana decided to leave the church instead and decide to go to the park. Ana cried, “ Why, Paulo. It’s been only a week since we broke-up and now he had another girl. How could he do this to me?”.
Ana running, with nowhere to go. And still she cry and cry, she did not notice a car approaching. John saw what happened so he rushes Ana to the hospital. When Ana woke up, she saw surprised and cannot believe what she saw, John. He was there when the accident happened.
John called Ana’s mom to tell her what happened to her daughter. Her Mom came in a hurry, “what happened to my daughter?” “she was hit by a car” John told Ana’s mom “she needs to have an operation, the doctors said.
Ana was in the operating room already, one of her doctors came out and talk to Ana’s mom. She was informed that Ana is in critical condition, “I’ll be honest with you, ma’am. Your daughter already has a little chance left to survive. “ Ana’s mom replied “ Please do everything Doctor, I will pay a lot of money just to save my daughter” “I’ll see what I can do” Doctor said.
After the operation, Ana transferred into her room to take a rest, still comatose. Ana’s mom ask the Doctor of what happened to her, why is she still in coma. “ It is because of the accident, that’s why she’s still in coma.” Doctor said.
“ Talk to her, even though she doesn’t reply, will help.” He continued. Ana’s mother thanked John for what he did to her daughter.
Back in school, Lenny sees john walking. Lenny approached John and asked where Ana is, “ Have you seen Ana ? I haven’t seen her for 3 days already”. John replied in a sad voice “ She is in the hospital, she had an accident, still in traumatic condition, by the way, where is Paulo? Did you see him?” “ why?” Lenny said, until john is gone.
In the coffee shop John saw Paulo, john hit Paulo as hard as he can. Paulo was shocked: he tried to hit John back. John confronted Paulo in a loud voice “ I thought you love her. But I was wrong what’s your problem?! “Paulo said angrily. “ she’s in the hospital, still in comma, she had her accident and its your entire fault !!. Paulo was shocked ; he can’t believe what he just heard. That’s same day, he visited Ana in the hospital, Paulo weeping hard, begging for forgiveness.
Two months later, Ana recovered and back In her normal condition. Paulo still visiting Ana in her house tried to talk and even reconcile. Ana already made her decisions, a right decisions for not letting him into her life again instead they became just GOOD FRIENDS.